Done Waiting

February 6, 2010
They tell me time heals wounds,
But my heart stays broken.
After a year of time,
My time is wasted,
His lips I tasted.
His voice I craved,
My love he saved.
And now I’m here,
After a year of time.
But now waiting-
Waiting seems like such a crime.





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GreenGirl13 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 3:42 pm
This is amazing.
 
lostnhim said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 8:57 pm
This is a great poem! I understand exatly what you are talking about, and think that you are a great writer! Keep writing!( You should check out my poem the rain... I think you would like it...)
 
blingblang4eva said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 9:50 pm
i like it :0 i can relate. very good
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 11:45 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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