Little Place

February 8, 2010
By cortdb SILVER, Tallmadge, Ohio
cortdb SILVER, Tallmadge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone is always on your mind, they're probably supposed to be there."


I am from a little place,

A place that’s very comforting,

Yet a place that is mine.

Secret to some,

A story to others.

I am from a little place,

Where I can shed tears,

Tears of sadness,

Tears of joy.

Whether it’s boy trouble,

School drama,

Family problems,

Whatever it is,

I know I have a place to go.

I am from a little place,

This little place,

Just happens to be,

My best-friends heart.

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The author's comments:
I really like this piece. So did my best-friend.

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cortdb SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 1:56 pm
cortdb SILVER, Tallmadge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone is always on your mind, they're probably supposed to be there."

thank you . i try to write , on topics that i feel strongly about ..

on Apr. 26 2010 at 12:01 pm
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

I loved this.  it was well organized and it had a lot of meaning to it.  I really like it...

cortdb SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:52 pm
cortdb SILVER, Tallmadge, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone is always on your mind, they're probably supposed to be there."

I definetly will. What are some names of your other work.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:50 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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I just wanted to say thank you for commenting on my work!!! I love it when people actually write about what they read instead of read it and then go.

Anyway, I also wanted to say that I love this poem. It is very simple and has a lot of meaning.

My favorite part is how you always return to the line 'I am from a little place'.

Great job!

Feel free to check out some of my other work too! :)

cortdb SILVER said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:00 pm
cortdb SILVER, Tallmadge, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone is always on your mind, they're probably supposed to be there."

thanks...thats so nice of you!!

i have appsolutely no problems with orphans♥

on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:27 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


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