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I am from a little place,

A place that’s very comforting,

Yet a place that is mine.

Secret to some,

A story to others.

I am from a little place,

Where I can shed tears,

Tears of sadness,

Tears of joy.

Whether it’s boy trouble,

School drama,

Family problems,

Whatever it is,

I know I have a place to go.

I am from a little place,

This little place,

Just happens to be,

My best-friends heart.

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StarrlytThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 12:01 pm
I loved this.  it was well organized and it had a lot of meaning to it.  I really like it...
 
cortdb replied...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 1:56 pm
thank you . i try to write , on topics that i feel strongly about ..
 
carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 6:50 pm
I just wanted to say thank you for commenting on my work!!! I love it when people actually write about what they read instead of read it and then go.
Anyway, I also wanted to say that I love this poem. It is very simple and has a lot of meaning.
My favorite part is how you always return to the line 'I am from a little place'.
Great job!
Feel free to check out some of my other work too! :)
 
♥dragonboxers replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 6:52 pm
I definetly will. What are some names of your other work.
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 2:27 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
Cortni B. replied...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 3:00 pm
thanks...thats so nice of you!!
i have appsolutely no problems with orphans♥
 
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