February 8, 2010
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As I breathe in and then out
inhaling the wonderful scent
of spring and sun
only to exhale
with a deep sigh
I realize
how privileged
I am to be

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carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 3:49 pm
Thanks so much for the comments! I love it when people read my work and then comment, it shows that they care. <3<br /> Thanks!
xLpoet said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 5:57 pm
I can only sum it up in one word. Powerful.
Powd3er said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 2:30 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Cortni B. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 6:32 pm
This song is so inspiring.How indepth you are!!
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