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February 6, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


So many questions and yet, unable to ask a single one;
My courage is within the very pits of my aching heart where I sewed up all my memoranda of you;
You're located just where my audacity may be detected

This is in an exclusively secretive place to where I alone hold the key;
My own personal abyss undeniably diluted of time;
Where no one can come close to finding;
Within me; whereas, in good hands you lay


The author's comments:
This is about how someone lost another really close to them and can't seem to get by. They don't want any pity, let alone special attention or treatment. plz plz comment :)

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:52 am
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

aw thank you so much! this made my day:) im so glad u liked it

on Aug. 1 2010 at 9:20 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Okay, so this definately just got 5 stars and added as a fave by me! So far this is my favorite of your poems (the others are great though!!!!)! The vocabulary and lone structure is brilliant and the topic is exceptional! I love it!!!!! Keep up the great work!

on May. 30 2010 at 8:55 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

your welcome!  :)

-rose


on May. 29 2010 at 11:33 am
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

thankk uu! it meanz alott:)

on May. 17 2010 at 11:08 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

This poem is so sweet, I absolutely love it!  I read it over a few times even.  ;)   Don't stop writing, girl, you're talented!

-Rose



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