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So many questions and yet, unable to ask a single one;
My courage is within the very pits of my aching heart where I sewed up all my memoranda of you;
You're located just where my audacity may be detected

This is in an exclusively secretive place to where I alone hold the key;
My own personal abyss undeniably diluted of time;
Where no one can come close to finding;
Within me; whereas, in good hands you lay



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despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 9:20 pm:
Okay, so this definately just got 5 stars and added as a fave by me! So far this is my favorite of your poems (the others are great though!!!!)! The vocabulary and lone structure is brilliant and the topic is exceptional! I love it!!!!! Keep up the great work!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:52 am :
aw thank you so much! this made my day:) im so glad u liked it
 
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BleedingRose said...
May 17, 2010 at 11:08 am:

This poem is so sweet, I absolutely love it!  I read it over a few times even.  ;)   Don't stop writing, girl, you're talented!

-Rose

 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
May 29, 2010 at 11:33 am :
thankk uu! it meanz alott:)
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 30, 2010 at 8:55 am :

your welcome!  :)

-rose

 
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