It's Funny

February 6, 2010
By DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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It's funny how
Three sentences
Can tear two people
Apart.
It's funny how
Just a few words
Could break a poor girl's
Heart.
It's painful how
Just one small lie
Can split a heart
In two.
And it's painful how
Just two more words
Could mend it back
Like glue.


The author's comments:
I learned that it's ok to cry or eat tubs of ice cream after getting your heart broken. It's ok to write poems and yell. But it's not ok to forgive them if they think "I'm sorry" will fix everything.

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on Apr. 8 2010 at 8:14 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thnx so much!!

on Apr. 8 2010 at 5:30 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

I like this a lot.  You were able to say so much in such few words.  Great job.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:41 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thanks so much so glad most people r liking it!!

on Mar. 4 2010 at 9:07 am
roxawesomeness PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Peace, Love, and R&R

i luv this. simple, short, awesome, keep on keeping on

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:10 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thnx so much!!

SammyG said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 3:20 pm
SammyG, Wilton, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough." -Mae West
"It's better to be a first-rate version of yourself than a second-rate version of anybody else." -Judy Garland

this is so good, simple and cute :)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 11:52 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thnx so much n i will.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:02 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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I can do anything

This is AMAZING check out my stuff also keep on writng

on Feb. 15 2010 at 3:02 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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ha thnx 4 the comment, n yeah, i luv glee.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:43 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor." - Anonymous

I like this...simple, cute, but sad. Yes, I think eating tubs of ice cream is the best therapy 2! :)

P.S. You like Glee? I LOVE Glee!!! :D


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