Deep Love

February 5, 2010
By rachelnicole GOLD, Arlington, Texas
rachelnicole GOLD, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe My Heart Really Didn't Skip A Beat....And Maybe The Twinkle In Your Eye Was The Sun Reflecting Weird, And Maybe The Feeling In My Stomach Was Just Not Having Enough For Breakfast...And Maybe I just Thought It Was Love"

i feel as if a huge hole has been punctured into my heart.
the boy i love seems to be slipping away.
it hurts me to see him almost turn into something i hate.
i wish i could help, but i really dont know how.
i love him dearly and it kills me to see him suffer.
i wish i could just take him and run away with him.
i hate what he's going through and while he's suffering i am too.
i never really knew what love was til he came along and now that i know i don't want to let him go.
he opened my eyes and made me belive love is possible.
he's sad and that makes me sad.
i will stay with him no matter what comes his way beause thats what love is all about.

The author's comments:
my bouyfriend brandon inspired this poem

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