If You Could Speak

February 5, 2010
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Looking up at me with those huge onyx holes you call eyes
Your tail, restlessly wagging behind you
What do you want?
What are you thinking?
If only I could peer inside your mind
Take a glimpse of your inner thoughts
BARK! You demand my attention once again

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ninian said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 12:40 pm
Awww.... thats really cute, descriptive, and full of emotion. wish my dog could speak too:)
Victoria~Alexis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 1:45 pm
haha dont we all? thank you, and btw this is the unfinished one,, i submitted it by accident.
ninian replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 3:52 pm
ohhhhh....... it is still really, REALLY great!
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