When I'm gone, do not sorrow

February 1, 2010
By Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read


When I'm gone,
do not sorrow.
For I am still here-
waiting, watching,
proctecting.
Don't worry.
There's no need to say goodbye.


The author's comments:
Don't miss me when I'm gone, for you have an entire life ahead of you. Do not sorrow, do not fret, the best of your life hasn't come yet.

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Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 1:41 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

Thanks!  I put the stuff that was originally in quotes into the rest of the body of the poem. Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it!

on May. 15 2010 at 11:16 am
Schnoodlebear SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you love and love what you do

I agree with Nikki too. It is already a great poem. But if you added some of the qoute it would make it an amazing poem!

Emiline SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 4:36 pm
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

Awesome, thanks for the comments, y'all! I really appreciate them. :)

on May. 12 2010 at 1:43 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

I agree you need to dive deeper!:)

BobbysGirl said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:39 pm
Yeah, Like again Niki is right...i think it would be better if it was longer an if you added what you put in the quotes! :} but i still like it too :}

Emiline SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 7:14 am
Emiline SILVER, Nashville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When deep injury is done to us, we will never recover until we forgive. Forgiveness cannot change the past. But it does enlarge the future."- Mary Karen Read

Thanks! I appreciate it.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:29 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

This is good but a little short. What you put in the quotes would have been a good addition to the poem. Keep up the good work (:


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