Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > When I'm gone, do not sorrow When I'm gone, do not sorrow By Emiline, Nashville, TN More by this author do not sorrow. For I am still here- waiting, watching, proctecting. Don't worry. There's no need to say goodbye. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 7 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Nikiblue said... Feb. 19, 2010 at 8:29 pm: This is good but a little short. What you put in the quotes would have been a good addition to the poem. Keep up the good work (: astheworldturns replied... Feb. 20, 2010 at 7:14 am : Thanks! I appreciate it. BobbysGirl replied... Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:39 pm : Yeah, Like again Niki is right...i think it would be better if it was longer an if you added what you put in the quotes! :} but i still like it too :} HeronHero replied... May 12, 2010 at 1:43 am : I agree you need to dive deeper!:) Muffy replied... May 12, 2010 at 4:36 pm : Awesome, thanks for the comments, y'all! I really appreciate them. :) Schnoodlebear replied... May 15, 2010 at 11:16 am : I agree with Nikki too. It is already a great poem. But if you added some of the qoute it would make it an amazing poem! Muffy replied... May 15, 2010 at 1:41 pm : Thanks! I put the stuff that was originally in quotes into the rest of the body of the poem. Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it!