January 29, 2010
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I don't get you at all
What do you see in me?
What possessed you to want
Someone like me
What whispered in your ear
Making you want to hold me close
With your roughly calloused
Guitar playing hands.
Who left you so harshly
That it made you miss me?
Foolish, childish me
Whatever it was
Whoever it was
I'm glad

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EmilyGiroux said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 4:44 pm
It's A M A Z I N G. I like your other ones too. They are all really good. I just didn't comment on them all! :)
bilbogirl replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 6:43 am
Thank you very much!!!!
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 10:25 pm
This is really good. I like how your tone was bitter at the beginning, and at the end it lightened up. Good work. Keep writing. You do have talent.
bilbogirl replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 8:31 am
Thank you soo much!!!!
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