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Mirai

January 29, 2010
By luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe


Wild and unknown,
Like a foreign beast,
She sleeps,
Silent and swift,
Always.
You hide from her,
You run,
Even cry,
But she cannot be avoided,
Ever.
She comes on quick,
Like cyanide,
And creeps into your life,
As welcome as a succubus,
Change.
She see's you,
Timid as a child,
Eye's wide, face flushed,
She smiles,
Acceptance.
You embrace her,
And sigh,
Relief like a river,
Clarity and comfort,
Future.
Known by all,
Hated by many,
She sleeps.


The author's comments:
A school assignment "Write a poem about the future". But its kinda hard to write a poem about something you dont know anything about.

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on Aug. 26 2010 at 11:37 pm
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

Thanks so much! I love getting feedback on my poetry and i will definitely check yours out :)

on Aug. 16 2010 at 1:23 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i love the personification. its very well written and flows well :) keep writing, Mel oh and check some of my stuff out if you would like, i would love to hear what you have to say ! again, great job

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:21 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

nice, i have about 7 in the works i'll check in later

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:05 pm
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

Ive got some stuff pending right now, three poems. And im submitting another soon, i just have to stop being so lazy and type it already. lol

on Aug. 10 2010 at 9:55 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

no prob, and thanks for looking at my stuff, let me know when you have more coming, I know i have stuff pending...

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:53 pm
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

Not at all. I wrote it to personify "future" as a woman, but no woman in particular. Thanks much for the comment :)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:53 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

it seems like your subconscious came out to play in your poem... are you talking about yourself? great stuff by the way, read some of mine?