Pieces This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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I have a good life, however
There are times when all the bad
Comes crashing down all
At once, like a wave.
And when it all blows over
And washes up on shore,
Another wave comes to destroy
Me, it doesn't matter
Whether the saltwater
Death is large or small,
It rips me apart and burns the
Pieces.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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tanneris2 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 7:28 pm
I really liked how your poem is easy to relate to and how you can really hear the tone and feeling in your words.
 
tanneris2 said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 6:21 pm

 i know exactly how you feel.  sometimes it just feels like all of the bad things in your life just comes crashing down on your shoulders all at once.

 

 
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