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Maybe the sky will open up
and something will fall out.
I don't know what it would be.
Just a little something to tide me over
until the seas part
and I can walk on water.



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A.Bekah.Girl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 7:07 pm:
i love it. the second half especially. and the first. ok the whole thing is wonderful...
 
-Jandee-SoundophobicPolite replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 7:39 pm :
Haha. Thank youuu. <3
 
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ItWasAMurderButNotACrime This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:01 pm:
Hey some of the best poems come when we are tired.  This was random, yes, but interesting, and more deep than you'd think. Yet again, and eye-catching title.
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:07 pm :
♥ Thank you very, horribly much.
 
ItWasAMurderButNotACrime This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:15 pm :
Mm--is horribly a compliment?
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:49 pm :
Yes. Very horribly much. ♥
 
ItWasAMurderButNotACrime This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:15 pm :
OK...if you say so.
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 11:27 am :
Yes. I say so. ♥
 
ItWasAMurderButNotACrime This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 12:52 pm :
I can see that.
 
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Katie_Grey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:06 pm:

okay,

it's official.

I love your work.

Maybe someday I'll try to get your autograph when your horribly tired,

but instead it will just be a thoughtful, imaginative masterpiece. like this!

 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:50 pm :

My autograph when I'm horribly tired? I doubt I would write a masterpiece. I would probably try to sign my name and it would look like a toddler learning to write his name... o.o Yeah... it's probably be best if I were fully conscious.

Hehe. I'm glad you are a fan of my work.

My dream is to be the Lady Gaga of poetry. Odd dream, eh?

 
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crawfordkid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 5:19 pm:
I can honestly say that I have never seen a poet able to put so much in a short poem until now, loved it! =)
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 6:51 pm :

crawfordkid! Is it weird to say I love you? lol. I've always wanted to tell you this, but I think you're kinda awesome. Lol. <- random

 

Anyways, thank you very much for your oh-so kind comment. ♥

 
crawfordkid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:11 pm :
Haha, the feeling is mutual my friend, I think your kinda awesome as well. =)
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:54 pm :
Awww. Thank you very much. ♥
 
Karma_Chameleon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 8:11 pm :
You're quite welcome. :-)
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:50 pm :
... the name change confused me for a good five minutes.
 
Karma_Chameleon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 2:21 pm :
Oops, sorry about that. I probably should have let you know who I was - there was no random stranger jumping in the convo. Haha
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 11:27 am :
The picture was a fairly good give away, but I wasn't exactly sure. Then it hit me. xD I can be slow sometimes.
 
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Mimi8 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 12:14 pm:
Wow, I love this. All of your poems a pretty short, and I like that. It is right to the point, and the last line is so clear if that makes any sense.
 
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