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Whatever shall I do,
when I see you.
Smirk and all.
Is there such a thing as pain?
Perhaps it's just an illusion,
Like our love?
But if my soul is damned;
Forget the tears,
If everything ends.

How could my eyes be shielded by beauty,
demonds surround the memories.
A dark pit of deathly essence,
covers over me.
This is real;
You are in your own fantasy.
But who am I to cast the first stone?
If everything ends.

You are too late.
Why do I still love your scent?
It pains me to hear the soft, silken voice.
I still remember the day,
engraved like ink on bones,
but since everything ends...



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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 27, 2010 at 8:38 pm
I like this captain. you sound really deep in thought like you cant make up your mind on whether or not you like this guy. 5 stars captain. i bet you like that. maybe i could email you some tomatoes....
 
MarinaOreo replied...
May 30, 2010 at 8:51 am
oh thank you. :) i don't think it's possible to email tomatoes lol
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 30, 2010 at 10:57 am
thats what they want you to think (wink,wink).....
 
MarinaOreo replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 10:25 am
:)      
 
DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 10:26 pm
Hey!! Great poem!! Like, REALLY awesome. I hate it when people think that they need to ryme to create a good poem. I mean, as long as you're writing, write whatever you want!!!! Lik this poem. This is a great poem, and the imagery is amazing. I luv the idea, too. Very mysterious. WOW WOW. Congrats.
 
MarinaOreo replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:47 pm
Yeah I agree with the whole rhyming thing, sometimes I think it can make it too cliche. But thanks so much! :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:38 pm
:-D totally. And its no problem. I really admire ur writing style!!
 
MarinaOreo replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:40 pm
Thank you! I appreciate it so much, have you checked out my other writings? I'm not so sure if they're better or worse than the ones you have read so far
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:42 pm
Ive only read this 1 n the other 1 ive commented on. ill check them out!!
 
MarinaOreo replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:43 pm
ok then!!
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:49 pm
I commented on ur Hatrid On Life.
 
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