Love Struck

January 12, 2010
By Ashley Werner BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
Ashley Werner BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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You send cold chills through my body. But some how inside my heart is warm. Our eyes meet as though we can only see our future together. My heart picks up pace because I know that those three words mean everything to the both of us. I love you, I say. Then my heart skips a beat as if this relationship is too good to be true. But it's not, this is reality. This is what it feels like to be in love.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I have a wonderful boyfriend and for the first time ever, I feel like I'm in love. Our relationship was my inspiration for this poem.

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on May. 14 2012 at 9:18 am
babygirl576 PLATINUM, Marion, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You lied, and I cried. You're a jerk, so I was hurt. You're a
deceiver, But I was a believer. Sorry I wasted your time, I guess?

hang on to what you got; i used to have that but then family and friends got in the way


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