Thanks Dad

January 12, 2010
By Salma BRONZE, Dubai, Other
Salma BRONZE, Dubai, Other
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Was it a sin?
I just followed my heart.
Never thought you’d love to see me cry
I’d in no way choose him over you,
But I guess its work that you chose over me!
I’m not leaving my home,
I can’t say bye so easily,
I never meant to get back at you
You were all I had, so was he
Now, I lost the both of you
Are you satisfied?
You wanted me with no smile
Well, congrats!
All I can say is, Thanks Dad!

The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote when my dad made me leave town with him, leaving back all my friends and loved one's. It was and still is very hard.

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on Feb. 4 2010 at 10:57 am
Shel-Bells SILVER, Middletown, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
When nothing goes right , go left (:

I no how you feel , my father used to make me move with him it was getting to the point were we'd move at least once a year,, new state or new town.. but now i havent seen him in over 4 years ! great way to take a stand !


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