January 22, 2010
Broken with time,
Vines twisted,
You can never leave,
It's a frozen moment,
in life,
No rewind.
Can you hear their dissapointed cries?
Paths meant for you to find.
Hear the angry teeth grind.
Hurry now,
They're furious now.
What you've dreaded...
The truth.

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the_Horsegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:18 pm
Sharply observant...I can unfortunately relate very well :-(
You're a really good poet.
Please check out my work? I'd appreciate any comments you have.
sarahbug16 said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:59 pm
oh hone this was good
Powd3er said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 2:57 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
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