i wish you would change

January 22, 2010
By jade thomas BRONZE, Randal, New York
jade thomas BRONZE, Randal, New York
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I wish you would change

I wish to

want to be
Able to come

home. With no
Worries what

will happen. For
The darkness

that will come upon
Me. When I

walk into the small
House I feel the

warmth against my face.

Cold as the winter ice. I hear the wind

It’s as

scream when you

By you

stand and I shiver

I walk

in place but try to


stand tall and face

you but you are
A cold

like a bull ready to

charge. I wish

for you to change.

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Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:38 pm
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)

This is a good poem, but what happened when you submitted it.


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