Alone

January 21, 2010
Seeing through your lies

Doors open and out time flies

Who cares what all we went through

All I can do

Is let go

Take pain slow

Drawing it into my veins

With each new love my heart strains

From memories of ours

Oh, how time scars

New faces leave me much regret

But with my love I take a bet

On how much it’s even worth

Without you I have now worth

I’m worthless, pity driving each day

You’re gone, I’m angry, how can you leave me this way?

Alone, you leave me so

Alone, a field of weeds,

Alone, a raft at sea,

Alone





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have_a_heart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 7:47 pm
I really liked this poem. I thought it was easy to understand and had emotion. other poems try to be too profound but i thought the simplicity really helped convey the message. it was amazing.
 
BaiLiHua This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 1:16 pm
This was perfect. It tells so much but is subtle enough to be a shapely poem.
 
Fredwardness said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 6:43 pm
The rhyming really takes away from this. I couldn't really get into this poem...it didn't feel like you put emotion behind this.
 
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