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Two Worlds

We live in two different worlds
Yours is made of wind and speed
Mine is from your warmth and smile
That never dissappear.

My world seems to be rocking, getting ever so closer to yours
Your world won't sway,
but you watch mine dangerously tilt

I saw you shift and took the chance
Now all you do is watch.
My world fades into nothing
And you smile to bring me back.

My world never tilted
Until I met you.
I wish yours would shift,
So I could laugh freely
without tilting





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Patience97 said...
May 25, 2010 at 3:02 pm
Wow nice poem :)
 
VampiericRain replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:39 pm
Thanx for the comment! :)
 
Ashlie94 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Very good, I get the emotions ur feeliing when u wrote this and how u want him to see u for who u are but he wont pay attention and come to u.
 
***Rain*** replied...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 3:54 pm
You hit the nail on the head.
Thanks for the comment! :)
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 8:59 pm
I'm not sure if it was meant to be sad, but it brought tears to my eyes. I really like it.
 
***Rain*** replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:43 pm
Thank you so much! (sad thing is its true....)
 
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 6:00 pm
Haha! 1st! Good poem! I's <3 U!
 
***Rain*** replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 4:02 pm
That one long line is an accident! It was my mistake!
 
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 5:30 pm
So? It's still good.
 
***Rain*** replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 6:07 pm
Yes but I felt really stupid after seeing it though................
 
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 6:29 pm
Weeelllll... just kidding! I've made mistakes like that too!
 
***Rain*** replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 9:25 pm
Your mean Tals!
 
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 5:47 pm
Yup! You should know this by now! =D
 
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