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Two Worlds

January 21, 2010
By VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?


We live in two different worlds
Yours is made of wind and speed
Mine is from your warmth and smile
That never dissappear.

My world seems to be rocking, getting ever so closer to yours
Your world won't sway,
but you watch mine dangerously tilt

I saw you shift and took the chance
Now all you do is watch.
My world fades into nothing
And you smile to bring me back.

My world never tilted
Until I met you.
I wish yours would shift,
So I could laugh freely
without tilting


The author's comments:
It's true. Which sucks.

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on May. 25 2010 at 3:39 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thanx for the comment! :)

on May. 25 2010 at 3:02 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow nice poem :)

on Mar. 24 2010 at 3:54 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

You hit the nail on the head.

Thanks for the comment! :)

on Mar. 24 2010 at 2:57 pm
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
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Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.

Very good, I get the emotions ur feeliing when u wrote this and how u want him to see u for who u are but he wont pay attention and come to u.

on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:43 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you so much! (sad thing is its true....)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:59 pm
I'm not sure if it was meant to be sad, but it brought tears to my eyes. I really like it.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 5:47 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Yup! You should know this by now! =D

on Feb. 2 2010 at 9:25 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Your mean Tals!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:29 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Weeelllll... just kidding! I've made mistakes like that too!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:07 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Yes but I felt really stupid after seeing it though................

on Feb. 2 2010 at 5:30 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

So? It's still good.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 4:02 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

That one long line is an accident! It was my mistake!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 6:00 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Haha! 1st! Good poem! I's <3 U!


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