Walking

January 21, 2010
By invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable


Every step I take,
Feels like a thousand years.
My feet and back ache,
And my eyes swims with unshed tears.
But though my knees shake,
Every movement forward eases my fears.



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on May. 14 2010 at 6:29 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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i love this one it's great.

on May. 13 2010 at 7:15 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

sure!! thanx so much for your feedback.

on May. 11 2010 at 10:00 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

whoa!! amazing (: i like how it starts out a little sad feeling, yet in the end it shows a glimmer of fear becoming something less prominent. amazingly written, 5 stars (: would you mind commenting on some of my work?

Mrs. V. said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 11:30 am
Wow! Fantastic poem!


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