Walking

Every step I take,
Feels like a thousand years.
My feet and back ache,
And my eyes swims with unshed tears.
But though my knees shake,
Every movement forward eases my fears.





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Collado92 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 6:29 pm
i love this one it's great.
 
dreamer_believer said...
May 11, 2010 at 10:00 am
whoa!! amazing (: i like how it starts out a little sad feeling, yet in the end it shows a glimmer of fear becoming something less prominent. amazingly written, 5 stars (: would you mind commenting on some of my work?
 
invisible13 replied...
May 13, 2010 at 7:15 am
sure!! thanx so much for your feedback.
 
Mrs. V. said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 11:30 am
Wow! Fantastic poem!
 
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