I Would if I Could

January 20, 2010
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I would give up my dreams for you.
i would take a bullet for you.
I would make sure your life is flawless, not even a little scratch.

?if i had
the power.
the courage.

to reveal myself

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:33 pm

wow this is really good. i like how the whole poem leads up until the ending line. and when it hit me, it really made me think. i reread it!

i really like your style of writing poetry. i hope you submit more!

very nice job with this. one of my favorites. (:

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