Because Of You

January 19, 2010
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She is only a shadow
of what she used to be.
She has a past
that is pain-filled.
Her few good memories
have faded with time.
She has no friends
that she can truly trust.
She is alone
and it wasn't her choice.
Her life fell apart
in such a short time.
She is crying
and drowning in her tears.
She is hurting
because she lost what mattered most.
Her fragile heart
is shattering with her world.
She is bleeding
in a dark, empty room.
And now she's dying
Because Of You.





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roxymutt said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 10:37 am
wow this is quite good...its so dark and accusing...i dont usually read poetry but i ventured out today to try it! i like this a lot
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 12:54 pm
Thanks. :) I guess it just depends on the style of the writing as to who will like it
 
TheWritician said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:11 pm
Thats amazing and at the same time dark. Good job!
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 5:53 pm
Thank You :)
 
Nikiblue replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 8:52 am
Your poems always have this dark, mellow feeling to them. Its almost kind of frightening haha Its all pretty well written though, so keep it up!
 
playmate replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:24 pm
i like thes poem alot keep the good work
 
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