Because Of You

January 19, 2010
By Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan


She is only a shadow
of what she used to be.
She has a past
that is pain-filled.
Her few good memories
have faded with time.
She has no friends
that she can truly trust.
She is alone
and it wasn't her choice.
Her life fell apart
in such a short time.
She is crying
and drowning in her tears.
She is hurting
because she lost what mattered most.
Her fragile heart
is shattering with her world.
She is bleeding
in a dark, empty room.
And now she's dying
Because Of You.



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on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:54 pm
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

Thanks. :) I guess it just depends on the style of the writing as to who will like it

on Jun. 8 2010 at 10:37 am
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

wow this is quite good...its so dark and accusing...i dont usually read poetry but i ventured out today to try it! i like this a lot

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on Feb. 19 2010 at 1:24 pm
playmate GOLD, Violethill, Arkansas
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i like thes poem alot keep the good work

on Feb. 16 2010 at 8:52 am
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

Your poems always have this dark, mellow feeling to them. Its almost kind of frightening haha Its all pretty well written though, so keep it up!

on Feb. 12 2010 at 5:53 pm
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

Thank You :)

on Feb. 12 2010 at 2:11 pm
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

Thats amazing and at the same time dark. Good job!


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