January 19, 2010
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The cold metal
against my skin.
The suspense of waiting,
the thread grows thin.

The time flies by,
Hiding shadows,
the one's that are inside.
Hiding my pain.

A hateful spark
In his black eyes.
The cold metal sinking
so deep inside.

Shadows consume
all that is left
leaving an empty shell
of what I was.

Liquid velvet
against silver
and spilling on the ground,
There's no time left.

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SmileyFace94 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 11:28 am
this is amazing. you continue to surpirse me! every one of your works just keeps getting better and better!
Ebony_Rose replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:18 pm
Thank you so very much
Brandywrote replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 6:58 pm
this is beautiful. i think youd like my "sweet angel" or "Wind, trees, and moutains" (the second one isnt posted yet though) but yeah, this really shows your emotion. i love the line "liquid velvet"
Ebony_Rose replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 6:45 am
Thanks  :) I will have to go read! :)))
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