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So many thoughts.
Confused
Hurt.
Pain.
My heart bleeds at the thought of you.
Pools of blood
And my last nerve breaking.
Heat boiling in my blood.
My fists clenching,
Unclenching.
One slap across the face wouldn’t hurt.
After all,
You broke my heart.





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Nessa13 said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 5:09 pm
I love it<3333
 
MidnightAngel7 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 8:28 pm
I love this, it shows emotion, and reveals truth. 5 Stars :-)
 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 6:10 pm
thanks much! :)
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:30 pm
I like this piece. Its not just 'eh'!!!!!
 
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
May 12, 2010 at 3:52 pm
awh. :) well thank you!!
 
Kairah027 said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:15 pm
Liked it, but didn't understand what "pools of blood" had to do with someone breaking your heart :S
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 11, 2010 at 5:22 pm
heart bleeds=pools of blood. thats alot of bleeding-I like it too.
 
Kairah027 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 6:32 pm
Oh, okay now i get it :) Very good and i like it even more :) <3
 
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
May 12, 2010 at 3:53 pm
thanks for the feedback!! :)
 
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