She Said Yes

January 18, 2010
By jgiese21 BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
jgiese21 BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
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The field
A symbol of our love
Where we first met
A bright summer day
For a Picnic
I looked into your eyes
For the first time
Your hair a sleek brown
Your eyes as blue as the azure sky
Right away I knew
Our love was like a magnet
Always keeping us together
One day
On the field
We were together, alone
The wind howled through
The freshly bloomed daisies
Our first kiss
The sweet fragrance of you
Made me love you even more
I was your shelter
Protecting you from everything
You were my heaven
I couldn’t live without you

Our greatest day
In the field
Came in the fall
The leaves spun themselves
To the frigid ground
We were standing, talking
When I knelt

I asked you the question
Of a lifetime
And tears of joy
Came tumbling
Down your cheeks
Like a waterfall
She said yes

The author's comments:
A picture of a field inspired me to write this poem. It was for an English assignment and i hope everyone likes it

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