January 18, 2010
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an attempt at sympathy
to show you i care
i began to to show
a side unknown

i try to help
but its too much
i have become ignorant
even insolent

atleast thats what you say
though not believe, hopefully
but when will you see
you mean everything to me

i hope and care
for you only
more than myself
at times i feel lonely

because if i am not
preoccupied with thought of you
than i feel im not doing
all i can do

and now you
cant even talk to me
im left with nothing
except memories

you once said
it was more than strong
our love for each other
i hope your not wrong

i hope i can be
a little less selfish
and see what you see
so i can fix me

in the end
i just need you to know
im here, always
i will never say no

i will take you back
when your in my grasp
and i'll make sure its good and tight
i'll hold on with all my might

so you can see
my sincerity
and you will love me, again

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LovelyMiss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 4:31 pm
Cr*p I cant stop reading your work!! Its so simple and so deep. Amazing:)
Powd3er said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 2:42 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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