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Senses With You And I

January 15, 2010
By Anonymous

I Hear My Voice
I See Your word
I cry your pain
You scream my name

Life is unpredictable
Death is unnoticeable

I see your tears
I feel your life
I cry your pain
You scream my name

Love is unnoticeable
Death is unpreritable

You hear my words
You see my voice
You scream my name
I cry your pain

Life is unpreritable
Death is unnoitceable

I see your touch
I feel your blood
You scream my name
I cry your pain

Life is unnoticeable
Death is unpredticable

You see my kiss
I feel your lips
I scream your name
You cry my pain

Life is unpredictable
Death is unnoticeable

I see your face
You see my grave
I feel your touch
You see my love

Life is noticeable
Death is predictable


The author's comments:
I was love this piece it is very deep and it has great value to it. I want people to realize the life is more then a day its a dream happening.

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on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:47 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx