New Shed of Light

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All the time I spent thinking about you is wasted forever.
Every time I see your face, my mind flashes back to the day you said you loved me.
Boy, it's a shame you didn't mean it.
Now the clouds are coming as my throat closes up.
The rain begins to pour and I can't control it's powerful beating on my heart and soul.
You shed light on my dreary days.
Now the clouds cry tears of pain.
The days drag on, but I see a new light.
One that will clean up the disaster you left behind.
Thank you for letting me find better things in life.
Life goes on before and after you.





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LuckyMar said...
May 19, 2010 at 5:05 pm

"Now the clouds cry tears of pain"

Love that. That line remainds me so much of my poetry, I always make write about raindrops and crying but anyway....

Love your poetry, it's really good. And about ur bio that I read, being the shy on in the back of the room is exsactly like me too so your not alone and Harry Potter!!! Yesssss,

New Shed of Light=***** 5 stars

 
evrycloudyday7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 6:43 pm
hahaha thanks so much for commenting!! it just made my day! =)
 
LuckyMar replied...
May 19, 2010 at 6:58 pm
Welcome, you're a really good writer  by the way, where'd u get the inspiration from 
 
evrycloudyday7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 8:01 pm
thanks! really life experiences usually. writing is the best way to vent your emotions. and sometimes i just listen to music and ideas come to me.
 
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