New Shed of Light

January 7, 2010
By evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n


All the time I spent thinking about you is wasted forever.
Every time I see your face, my mind flashes back to the day you said you loved me.
Boy, it's a shame you didn't mean it.
Now the clouds are coming as my throat closes up.
The rain begins to pour and I can't control it's powerful beating on my heart and soul.
You shed light on my dreary days.
Now the clouds cry tears of pain.
The days drag on, but I see a new light.
One that will clean up the disaster you left behind.
Thank you for letting me find better things in life.
Life goes on before and after you.


The author's comments:
The readers can interpret this in many ways. It's generally about heartbreak, and how to realize that life will go on. “Come what may, time and the hour runs through the roughest day." Macbeth, Act I, Scene 111.

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on May. 19 2010 at 8:01 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n

thanks! really life experiences usually. writing is the best way to vent your emotions. and sometimes i just listen to music and ideas come to me.

on May. 19 2010 at 6:58 pm
LuckyMar BRONZE, Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"My world would be nothing without words on paper"-------- My own personal quote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Welcome, you're a really good writer  by the way, where'd u get the inspiration from 

on May. 19 2010 at 6:43 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n

hahaha thanks so much for commenting!! it just made my day! =)

on May. 19 2010 at 5:05 pm
LuckyMar BRONZE, Plainfield, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My world would be nothing without words on paper"-------- My own personal quote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Now the clouds cry tears of pain"

Love that. That line remainds me so much of my poetry, I always make write about raindrops and crying but anyway....

Love your poetry, it's really good. And about ur bio that I read, being the shy on in the back of the room is exsactly like me too so your not alone and Harry Potter!!! Yesssss,

New Shed of Light=***** 5 stars



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