LOSING CONTROL

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The slightest comment knocks me off my path,
I tumble back to a world of darkness.
The dark engulfs me from inside out,
I shiver but my heart is burning with wrath.

The anger is condensed at my very core,
It makes its way up, suffocating me.
My body tingles with a feeling I do not understand,
I can’t control myself anymore.

I let myself disintegrate; there is nothing left of me.
My positive traits, my personality, my love—all vanish.
I fall asleep from exhaustion,
When I wake up, I am empty,

New heart,
New soul.
New day,
New start.





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TheWrittenHeart said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 12:17 am
Man, Elisa, this is really good. I esp. love the last stanza...just BEAUTIFUL :)
 
elikon replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 7:04 pm
thanks. :)
 
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