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The Dark Angel

She isn't proud of what she does
But to her it feels like a must
Trying to escape the pain
Wanting to forget all the days
If only someone could see
That the pain ran so deep
Shameful tears fill her eyes
Addicted to a clear demise
She hides her secret with a smile
No one notices all the while
Then one night all alone
She goes too far on her own
Her pain forever numbed
At an age way too young
Her life forever gone
If someone had seen the signs
Would the dark angel still be alive



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Supernova7 said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 11:58 am:
Amazing I could picture the girl so vividly.
 
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ItsCourtneykidds said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 10:45 pm:
I think this is the one that I can relate to the most. The things you said bring back horrible, terrifying images into my head, but that's a good thing, because most people can't. And although it's a terrible thing for me to remember, I wouldn't mind remembering it when I see my true self through the words you have created. This isn't neccessarily critique, but I just wanted to say, that I enjoy your work and hope you continue(:
 
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RenaissanceMan said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 10:02 pm:
Hey I like it. Of course I got my own interpretation from it but personally I think vagueness is good. Let your reader think about what you said-don't just tell them. I think you've got that down
 
kenna2013 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 5:10 am :
Thank you :)
 
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CodyBalls said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 1:28 pm:
Hey Kenna Whats up? I told you I wouldn't forget about you. So I still haven't figured out how to talk to Amanda yet. :( It sucks not being able to talk to her and you. I think im going to go to a family member's house who lives by her this weekend though. And we might get together and have some Starbucks and a movie (our signature date :) lol ) That be great hehe Hope it all works out. Well I ended up writing some stuff yesterday I'll post it on here but i'll post ... (more »)
 
CodyBalls replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 1:49 pm :
Well here are 2 that I started and hope to add on to. Feel free to add or correct anything you'd like.
"I feel your heart beat against my chest
As I lay here and watch you rest
With your head
Upon my chest
I listen to you
As you take breath by breath"
here is the second
"When you walk into the room
Everything else stands still
When your standing by my side
Right where you reside
Everyth... (more »)
 
kenna2013 replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:14 pm :
You HAD ME WORRIED! AND IM GLAD YOU MIGHT GET TO SEE HER AND I MIGHT BE GOIN ON A DATE WITH MY GUY SATURDAY....I LOVE YOUR STUFF LIKE ALWAYS... STAY IN TOUCH WITH ME
 
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kenna2013 said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 7:44 pm:
please feel free to comment let me know what you think
 
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