The Dark Angel

January 11, 2010
By kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."


She isn't proud of what she does
But to her it feels like a must
Trying to escape the pain
Wanting to forget all the days
If only someone could see
That the pain ran so deep
Shameful tears fill her eyes
Addicted to a clear demise
She hides her secret with a smile
No one notices all the while
Then one night all alone
She goes too far on her own
Her pain forever numbed
At an age way too young
Her life forever gone
If someone had seen the signs
Would the dark angel still be alive


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on Jun. 22 2010 at 11:58 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Amazing I could picture the girl so vividly.

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:14 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

You HAD ME WORRIED! AND IM GLAD YOU MIGHT GET TO SEE HER AND I MIGHT BE GOIN ON A DATE WITH MY GUY SATURDAY....I LOVE YOUR STUFF LIKE ALWAYS... STAY IN TOUCH WITH ME

on Apr. 4 2010 at 10:45 pm
CourtneyRenee GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"..Paper people in their paper towns burning paper just to try and stay warm for the future.."
Paper towns by John Green

I think this is the one that I can relate to the most. The things you said bring back horrible, terrifying images into my head, but that's a good thing, because most people can't. And although it's a terrible thing for me to remember, I wouldn't mind remembering it when I see my true self through the words you have created. This isn't neccessarily critique, but I just wanted to say, that I enjoy your work and hope you continue(:

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:10 am
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

Thank you :)

on Mar. 31 2010 at 10:02 pm
RenaissanceMan SILVER, Westland, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born. It was born. So it began. It continues. It will outlive me. People whisper, stare, giggle. Their eternal privilege. My eternal curse-Joyce Carol Oates

Hey I like it. Of course I got my own interpretation from it but personally I think vagueness is good. Let your reader think about what you said-don't just tell them. I think you've got that down

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 1:49 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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Well here are 2 that I started and hope to add on to. Feel free to add or correct anything you'd like.

"I feel your heart beat against my chest

As I lay here and watch you rest

With your head

Upon my chest

I listen to you

As you take breath by breath"

here is the second

"When you walk into the room

Everything else stands still

When your standing by my side

Right where you reside

Everything is true

Everything is right

I know that this night

Will last forever

Always in our hearts

And we'll never

Fall apart"

I have a beat for this one too :P

I hope you like them. Let me know what you think. :)

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 1:28 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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Hey Kenna Whats up? I told you I wouldn't forget about you. So I still haven't figured out how to talk to Amanda yet. :( It sucks not being able to talk to her and you. I think im going to go to a family member's house who lives by her this weekend though. And we might get together and have some Starbucks and a movie (our signature date :) lol ) That be great hehe Hope it all works out. Well I ended up writing some stuff yesterday I'll post it on here but i'll post another comment with my favorite in it because it takes so long for them to get approved lol Hope you and your man are doing well and everything :) Can't wait to get your reply tmrw lol Talk to ya later

Cody

*If All Else Fails*

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 7:44 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

please feel free to comment let me know what you think


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