Your World to Mine

January 11, 2010
Your world
created mine

Your leaf
Became my vine

Your rainbow
Leads to my pot of gold

But your selfish heart
Made mine cold

The needle you thread
Became my scarf

Your calm fire
Inside my hearth

I planted my heart
But you made it grow

Often you whispered;
"How I love you so."

Your eyes gazed
Intently into mine

That is what brought
Your world to mine





Join the Discussion

This article has 4 comments. Post your own now!

allmostfamous said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 6:51 pm
this is absolutely wonderful! keep writing!
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 2:53 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
monnnster This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:44 pm
So beautifully written! :)
 
forever_his1993 said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 12:25 pm
wow! i think this is one of my favorite poems now! it's really good, and i absolutely love it. =) five stars! lol.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback