Your World to Mine

January 11, 2010
By NorthernLites8 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
NorthernLites8 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Always remember how beautiful your spirit is! ~Cody S.O. Haynes~


Your world
created mine

Your leaf
Became my vine

Your rainbow
Leads to my pot of gold

But your selfish heart
Made mine cold

The needle you thread
Became my scarf

Your calm fire
Inside my hearth

I planted my heart
But you made it grow

Often you whispered;
"How I love you so."

Your eyes gazed
Intently into mine

That is what brought
Your world to mine

The author's comments:
This piece of poetry is about how a guy dumped his former girlfriend for someone else. She is hurt and angry with him, even though she still loves him so much.

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on Jan. 23 2010 at 6:51 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is absolutely wonderful! keep writing!

on Jan. 22 2010 at 2:53 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

monnnster GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:44 pm
monnnster GOLD, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather pick flowers instead of fights"

So beautifully written! :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:25 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

wow! i think this is one of my favorite poems now! it's really good, and i absolutely love it. =) five stars! lol.


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