See, not Look

January 6, 2010
Do you see,
or look?
Can you look beyond what meets the eye?
I couldn't care less
as long as you don't see me.

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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 6:58 pm
Short, but good. i like it. It makes you think kinda. at first you just look and say yeah ok and then it hits you like, ooo wow, So, i really lie this. Keep writing so i can keep reading! :)
Powd3er said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 11:15 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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