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Entwined in Eden

January 5, 2010
By mandapanda2 PLATINUM, Preston Hollow, New York
mandapanda2 PLATINUM, Preston Hollow, New York
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Forsaken fidelity rips away
raging quarrels of remembrance.
Holding on to sorrowful clouds
While pondering every vow.

Love still lingering but unfortunately a miss
and waiting for lovesick pain to come again;
Coming forth from song or raging depths.
Delivering doubt, while hell hits their home.

Fate made it too late
together they come apart as love surrenders:
Their shattered windows slit away their hearts
and doors slam shut murmurs of hope.

The author's comments:
its a look alike poem

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