Forgiveness

December 21, 2009
By EmIsHere BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
EmIsHere BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
What we do in life echoes in eternity.


I forgive you.
I forgive you for your mistakes.
All of your mistakes.
I forgive you for the lies.
I forgive you for the hate.
I forgive you for your comments.
Dear Family: I am still angry.
The fire in my heart is still burning strong.
But I will forgive you, for everything.
For all you've put me through.
The pain in my heart.
The ice in my veins.
Do you forgive me?



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_truth GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 2:38 pm
_truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"it's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for what your not..."
"life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away"

the emotion is so real. i like this

on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:37 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I agree, this is very emotional, I can feel the anger and hurt behind the lines.  Nice rhythm and flow, and good way of putting things.

on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:28 pm
EmIsHere BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
What we do in life echoes in eternity.

Thank you!

on Jul. 9 2010 at 7:41 pm
TravelerInWaiting SILVER, Glen Ridge, New Jersey
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I really like your poem. I can definutly feel your emotions throuigh it. Iespecially like the question at the end, it seems to tie the whole thing together.




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