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I forgive you.
I forgive you for your mistakes.
All of your mistakes.
I forgive you for the lies.
I forgive you for the hate.
I forgive you for your comments.
Dear Family: I am still angry.
The fire in my heart is still burning strong.
But I will forgive you, for everything.
For all you've put me through.
The pain in my heart.
The ice in my veins.
Do you forgive me?





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_truth said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 2:38 pm
the emotion is so real. i like this
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 1:37 pm
I agree, this is very emotional, I can feel the anger and hurt behind the lines.  Nice rhythm and flow, and good way of putting things.
 
TravelerInWaiting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 7:41 pm
I really like your poem. I can definutly feel your emotions throuigh it. Iespecially like the question at the end, it seems to tie the whole thing together.
 
EmIsHere replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 1:28 pm
Thank you!
 
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