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In Memory

January 14, 2010
By baileymarieanne SILVER, Portland, Oregon
baileymarieanne SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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Silver rose, better place.

Lovely times, golden gates.

Dosn't like to see you cry, knows that shes the reason why.

Silent tears, loved memories.

Making you heart feel so empty.

Soon feel good shes out of pain.

But for now let tears fall like rain.


The author's comments:
My friend's grandmother died, I was attempting to comfort her.

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theendd said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 5:27 pm
you spelt "doesn't" wrong.. But its still a good poem,

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:41 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwww. that's sweet.

on Jan. 18 2010 at 11:02 pm
justkasey SILVER, Oak Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"These violent delights have violent ends And in their triumph die, like fire and powder, Which as they kiss, consume." -William Shakespere (Romeo and Juliet)

This reminds me of a friend i know. Love it:)

on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:19 pm
ErinWrites007 SILVER, Sherwood, Wisconsin
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Wow I really love this. It's so simple, yet it's enough to convey the emotions.

Well done! :)