He was

December 7, 2009
By bandmusic101 PLATINUM, Meadville, Pennsylvania
bandmusic101 PLATINUM, Meadville, Pennsylvania
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My daddy is a good man
He doesn’t lie
He doesn’t steal
And he never does what he’s not suppose to
My momma is a wonderful women
But one day she decided that she wanted a bad boy
The day she left
That’s the first day I ever saw my daddy steal
He stole the heart of a pretty, young girl
My daddy said to me
“You can leave with your momma
You can go with her on all her adventures
But I want you to know that you have my heart
I gave it to the day you were born
This can always be your home
You can always come back
I love you.”
And that’s the day I realized that my daddy was the good one
I was the stealer
I was the liar
‘Cause that’s the day I told my daddy I didn’t want to stay.
My daddy was a good man
Never stole
Only gave
Never lied
Always loved


The author's comments:
this is just a writing. its from no personal account, just a poem i came up with in class.

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on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:46 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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