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You’re dead
I never really knew you
You went to my elementary school
But you were a year older than me
So I never really talked to you
I don’t think you had many friends
Maybe that’s part of it

But you were in eighth grade
You were only a year older than me
I saw you yesterday
You were laughing with a friend
You seemed happy

But I guess you weren’t very happy
Because you took your own life
And I guess I know why
I could tell you felt alone in the world
Using past tense feels so strange

I don’t know why
But it hurts me
And I’m sorry





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Powd3er said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 2:51 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Lily said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 7:37 pm
Oh my gosh, that is so sad and good! I'm sorry for your loss
 
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