(Life is) Thinking

December 15, 2009
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Sinking deep into
these lifeless pages
Make me think this is for real.
What’s left of this
place I call life,
Is rearranging, on me.

Oh now let’s not get to guessing
It only rearranges,
Life itself rearranges.
There’s no use in trying to act now
What you’re mistaking for the madman
Is me.

The walls are coming
down with a quickness
I’m coming down with an illness
I wouldn’t believe if I hadn’t bore witness
This is not the way
I thought it would be

Though not alone, I’m lonely inside
These images don’t do it for me
It seems life itself is going mad
Yes, it rearranges on me.

Now that the truth is uncovered
Life no loner changes,
But the truth rearranges.
Take a good look at my face
And take one look at the madman
…It’s me.

The walls are coming
down with a quickness
Life itself coming
down with an illness
Life is not the way
I thought it would be
Life is coming over me.

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. said...
on Sep. 23 2011 at 7:54 pm
Really? Another parody actually. Thats why it doesnt seem to- MERCI CAPTAIN!!!

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 9:37 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Sometimes I feel like this when everything I thought was true turned out to be a lie. 

This is one of my favorites of yours, Boosflash. Love it!


on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:15 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

:-) Why thank you (-:

on Aug. 8 2010 at 9:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

AHHHHH!!!! you'r awesome captain. I love it!!!

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:51 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

There goes the monkey again...

on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:06 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i didnt, but thats a good idea.......

on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:22 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Well, I'm sure someone like you would take the time to count just how many creepy teeth there were in the creepy smiley face before you posted it as your online face on Teen Ink.

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:39 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

(thumbs up and creepy evil smiley face showing all fourty seven teeth, and yes there are fourty seven of them.)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 6:10 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I'm sure I do ;-)  especially if I helped create them.

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thats nice captain, as long as you can cope with and understand my feelings of unventable fustration.

on Jul. 29 2010 at 5:20 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I'm not sure I'd want a monkey in my room...I've got enough of them going in there without my permission as it is...

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

what are the odds. "did you crawl under her chair?" "nope I couldnt, theres a blanket under it." "well, how about that." "i know right!" "so how are you supposed to do your dance?" "i dont know captain, i could really use the monkey."

on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:20 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, you can't, it's occupied by a big blanket needed to hold it up.  

on Jul. 18 2010 at 5:23 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmmm....I'll be under the chair...

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:10 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

...well...? I have a new/old bed that's bouncy and comfortable, but that's the only thing in my room besides the old table and fold-in chair...

on Jul. 6 2010 at 8:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmm...okay, well, tell me about your furniture...

on Jul. 6 2010 at 9:28 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Alright, whatever, but I warn you, the paint's peeling, and there are holes in the wall, so you may have to shout some times...

on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:23 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

reread me captain. you dont need the stupid smiley face. all you need is me. hang me on the wall so i can tell you when you're being an idiot. this has to do with nothing the stupid post, and smiley face. reread me captain. reread me....

on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:12 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Well, considering you consist of only a head, it would be kind of hard to need your body...wouldn't it?

on Jul. 3 2010 at 11:58 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

all you need is my body. you're hilarious captain.


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