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You'll feel it..

December 14, 2009
By Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.


Empty smiles eat up your face,
they carve their wordless thoughts into the back of your skull,
drill their memories threw your spine.
You'll feel it in your hands that once held hers so strong and sure.
You'll feel it in your arms where she'd lay for hours not uttering one word but you didn't care, she looked to beautiful laying that way, still and ever so deep in thought.
You'll feel it on your lips were promises stated were to strong for your shoulders to carry.
You'll feel it deep in your heart were her hands grasped and held so tightly on(her fingers haven't yet been pried away.)
You'll feel it in your shirt, the one you let her borrow because it was freezing cold out and you two got soaked in the rain.
You'll feel it in your sheets, were your tender love was made.
You'll feel it, You'll feel it, You'll feel it..
You will feel it everywhere.



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on Feb. 14 2010 at 9:19 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

Thank you very much(:

on Feb. 10 2010 at 10:36 am
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
47 articles 7 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hands?

-Ernest Gaines.

this shook me profoundly. it's an amazing work of poetry. the sense of the relationship and how one side feels is borderlining on astounding and mystifying. i really enjoyed reading this.