Belita

December 13, 2009
By awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt


I look at my Belita
And suddenly
She is a book
I read the wrinkles by her eyes
That I know are from smiles past
Crinkly smiles full of laughter
And I breathe in the scent
Like the smell of an old book
Steaming rice and
Musty cellars
And Shalimar perfume
I see coca-colored
hands that have worked so hard
And now they’re trembling
Because it’s like she’s
Surprised
That there’s no work
And I think
When I have lived so many
Many years
On this earth
Will I be as wise?
Because I know that when I am
A grandmother
I won’t care about how quickly
I can run off my times table
I’ll care if I can do
The things that I love about my Belita
Like making rice
And cream
Ironing shirts so they look
Brand new
Finding the cheapest deals
At Market Basket
I think
Will I have trembling hands
Waiting to work?
And I think
One day who will read me
Like a book?


The author's comments:
When I was little I couldn't say the name for my puerto-rican grandmother: abuelita, so I always called her Belita which seems to have stuck.

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:28 pm
maggiebar1 GOLD, Valparaiso, Indiana
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i love this... its actually funny because when i was little i couldnt say my mexican grandmas name right either and i called her teeta... well thts wat it sounded like it was spelled tita i just didnt want any confusion... haha ;) could you comment on some of my work? Plllleease??:)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:31 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Wow! This is so comfy-cozy and old fashioned; my favorite kinda poem. This reminds me especially of a poem I read last year though I don't remember the title; it had a line about crinkly smiles too... 

Anyhow GREAT job. 


on Feb. 3 2010 at 5:11 pm
wombatz-rule GOLD, Montrose, Minnesota
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Thanks! I love it when people read my work, so thank you very, very much! I look forward to seeing some new work of yours. :)

on Feb. 3 2010 at 2:51 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

Thank you so m uch! Your comment means so much, esspecially coming from such a fantastic author-I've read quite a few of you articles, and loved them all :)

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:14 pm
wombatz-rule GOLD, Montrose, Minnesota
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WOW! This is great! I have read a lot of your other work, and I love all of it. You have a true talent for writing, and I love how I really can't find anything to provide constructive criticism for! Congratulations on being an amazing author. :)


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