Your world

December 11, 2009
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Your eyes have no end
like an endless ocean
Your heart is full
like a world filled with people
yet that world holds one person


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Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 4:16 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
SilverDawn said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 10:50 pm
aww, that's sweet! (:
the idea in your comment is good, but i honestly didn't get that from reading the poem. to me, the poem sounds like it's about someone who knows her lover really really loves her and that she's the only thing in his world. maybe it's 'cuz i'm in a romantic mood? haha, i unno, but maybe you could use your comment idea to make another poem!
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