Your world

December 11, 2009
By kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart


Your eyes have no end
like an endless ocean
Your heart is full
like a world filled with people
yet that world holds one person


me


The author's comments:
I hope that people will get the message of how you should look at someone and realize what you love about them instead of whats wrong with them.

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:16 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:50 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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aww, that's sweet! (:

the idea in your comment is good, but i honestly didn't get that from reading the poem. to me, the poem sounds like it's about someone who knows her lover really really loves her and that she's the only thing in his world. maybe it's 'cuz i'm in a romantic mood? haha, i unno, but maybe you could use your comment idea to make another poem!


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