Out cold

December 23, 2009
By montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
cliche quotes I have are.....
I know, right? and..... Are you kidding me?


I'm out cold
lying on the floor
so bold
by the frame of the door

light dances inside me head
turning blue and then dark red

i come alive again
and i feel
my sin
whirl and reel

i smell blood
it's caked like mud

it's mine
i wonder who
oh fine
would do

such a thing to a vampire
probably my friend the liar


The author's comments:
100 theme challenge
3. Light
84. out cold

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