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Sunlight warms my face
And the concrete beneath my feet
Leaves imprints on my soles.
Tufts of grass
Sway flimsily.
A bare tree with the potential
To wear a floral crown
Watches pliant dandelions
Succumb to
A
Swift
Breeze.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:52 pm:

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2012 at 8:58 am :
That's me^
 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 3, 2012 at 8:40 pm :
 Mind checking out some of my work?:)
 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:52 pm:

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:52 pm:

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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guitarist said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 4:45 pm:
Your poem makes me ache for spring. Nice work!
 
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