Thank you

December 17, 2009
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


Thank you for being with me;
Even though I never quite saw you, I know you were there
Swarming around me, just like an angry bee;

It's easier to hate, it's harder to love me;
You don't understand; You're quick here to judge me
Put your feet in my Nikes;
Picture you living my life;
Picture you're stuck in a cell, picture you wasting your life
Picture you're willing to bleed;
Picture you wearing the scar;
Thank you for making me struggle;
Thank you for making me cry;
I'm perfecting and it's all thanks to you


The author's comments:
This is about how no matter how much I go through, I'm always trying to look to the other half of it. What could come out of it.
I've been through alot, but it has forever made me stronger.

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on Mar. 19 2010 at 9:39 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

ha thxxx u.

the wordz just seemed to flow

when i waz writing. pretty much sayin

all the building blocks in life will eventually

take you places where ur meant 2 be :)

on Mar. 19 2010 at 9:37 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

I really like this one...

Not sure why...

All I know is that this is a really cool piece.

Good job!

on Mar. 19 2010 at 9:26 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

thankk u! i really just started

writing this while i waz listening 2 some

song. thx again 4 da feedback xD

id luv 2 check out ur work

on Mar. 18 2010 at 10:38 pm
Keelin2010 SILVER, Mt. Shasta, California
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

I love this one! It motivates me to think positive. You're a very talented writer.


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