December 17, 2009
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tick. tock. tick. tock.


{ nerve-wracking, knee-knocking, hands sweating, heart pounding}



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mee-mee said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 8:04 am

i like this poem

well done !

Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 9:32 pm
this site is hard to juggle when you want to do artistic stanzas... still good stuff... I like the abstract!
kiwi12 replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:55 pm
ah yes it is! thank you for understanding!
♥Arquette♥ said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 6:15 pm
i like the structure of this poem, i can visualize this happening. this is short and sweet. excellent!
kiwi12 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 5:08 pm
thank you!
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