Rainbow

January 4, 2010
By Anonymous

Visionary colors in my sight,
Make brighter to show all beauty.
See the lovely strip. It was very vary to think about. Because the rainbow could give us the new world in our imagination. Also, not every time, we had enough time to dream about the new world. I thought that the rainbow could give us the good thought by various.


The author's comments:
I imagined the rainbow, and its colors which made me to think about.

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on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:50 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks you for your comment!! : ]

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:50 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks for vote : ]

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:49 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thank you!!! I love to write about the nature a lot!! Hope you enjoyed it :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:48 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks for your comment!!! Glad you enjoyed it!! :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:48 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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A strip means every colors of the rainbow... Wonder how you thought that... But ok, I will concern more about that :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:47 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks for saying that!!! I will keep working on poem a lot more and more~

: )

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:46 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks!! I love your poem too!!! :)

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:42 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks!!! I did worked hard!! : ]

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:41 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Yah... I worked hard on poem a lot...: ]
Also, specially I love to write about the nature,

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:40 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks you so much!!! Glad you enjoyed!! : ]

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:39 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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:) I always love to write about the imagination stuff.... it make me excited!!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:38 pm
Kyung-Jin SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Thanks!!! Hope you enjoyed it!!! : ]

thinqtwo said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:00 am
i thought this was a very intriuing poem.you went beyond what people desribe a rainbow....good peice.

on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:25 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:31 am
amazing poem i loved it it made me smile soo much! keep on writing!

Gisella said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:22 am
This poem was really good.

It can show that you put hard work on it!

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on Jan. 13 2010 at 3:34 pm
Violet1 BRONZE, Cleburne, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"were there is food,there is hope" ;D

wow!!!its real good!!!!:) p.s. please check an d and comment my poems!!!!thnx

Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 2:56 pm
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

Hey this is really good! 4 stars! Keep writing! I'm on to read more of your work!!

on Jan. 12 2010 at 11:11 am
pumpkinsmasherdancer, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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umm...that made no sense.

and i'm not quite sure i want to see a strip. inappropiate!

on Jan. 11 2010 at 1:04 pm
alenamariea SILVER, St.louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
ohhh godd.

i love it.

very descriptive:)


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