Rainbow

By , Indianapolis, IN
Visionary colors in my sight,
Make brighter to show all beauty.
See the lovely strip. It was very vary to think about. Because the rainbow could give us the new world in our imagination. Also, not every time, we had enough time to dream about the new world. I thought that the rainbow could give us the good thought by various.





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thinqtwo said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 8:00 am
i thought this was a very intriuing poem.you went beyond what people desribe a rainbow....good peice.
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thanks!!! Hope you enjoyed it!!! : ]
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:25 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:39 pm
:) I always love to write about the imagination stuff.... it make me excited!!
 
whitelavendarr said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:31 am
amazing poem i loved it it made me smile soo much! keep on writing!
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:40 pm
Thanks you so much!!! Glad you enjoyed!! : ]
 
Gisella said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 7:22 am
This poem was really good.
It can show that you put hard work on it!
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:41 pm
Yah... I worked hard on poem a lot...: ] Also, specially I love to write about the nature,
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:42 pm
Thanks!!! I did worked hard!! : ]
 
Violet1 said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 3:34 pm
wow!!!its real good!!!!:) p.s. please check an d and comment my poems!!!!thnx
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:46 pm
Thanks!! I love your poem too!!! :)
 
Shannon_ said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 2:56 pm
Hey this is really good! 4 stars! Keep writing! I'm on to read more of your work!!
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:47 pm
Thanks for saying that!!! I will keep working on poem a lot more and more~
: )
 
Allison C. said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 11:11 am
umm...that made no sense.
and i'm not quite sure i want to see a strip. inappropiate!
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:48 pm
A strip means every colors of the rainbow... Wonder how you thought that... But ok, I will concern more about that :)
 
alenamariea said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 1:04 pm
i love it.
very descriptive:)
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:48 pm
Thanks for your comment!!! Glad you enjoyed it!! :)
 
Autumn126 said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 8:17 am
i thought it was lovely! I found your picture and title interesting so i thought i would check it out. i really liked how you dicsribed the rainbow at first and then you made us think about how we could use the rainbow for our imagination. It is a great poem!!
 
Kyung-Jin replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 6:49 pm
Thank you!!! I love to write about the nature a lot!! Hope you enjoyed it :)
 
Daniel W. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:51 am
This poem was very detailed. 4 stars.
 
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