Try To See

December 29, 2009
By lizzy96 GOLD, Atglen, Pennsylvania
lizzy96 GOLD, Atglen, Pennsylvania
16 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't about making it through the storm; it is about dancing in the rain


Try to live my life like me
Try to understand
Try to tell me what you see
And all that is planned
Do you see the hurt?
Like I do?
My face against the dirt
Do you see the moments shared?
Like I do
Perfectly unprepared
Try to see the things I see
And then tell me you don’t agree



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on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:31 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

on Jan. 13 2010 at 5:18 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I felt so much anger in this. Way to go. It's so much powerful if a poet release their emotion into their work...Good job!

Please if you have time, check out my work. Comment and rate if you wish thanks.

on Jan. 12 2010 at 7:54 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

this is good. i like the emotion in it. its so raw

on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:14 pm
i love it :)

and i do see the hurt thru my own eyes so i can imagine the hurt from yours

lizzy96 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 8:37 pm
lizzy96 GOLD, Atglen, Pennsylvania
16 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't about making it through the storm; it is about dancing in the rain

i checked out your work and i liked i a lot. thanks for the comment!

on Jan. 8 2010 at 4:45 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

i know wat you mean, i dont think i could've said it in a better way :) keep writing and if u can check me out :)


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