Try To See

December 29, 2009
Try to live my life like me
Try to understand
Try to tell me what you see
And all that is planned
Do you see the hurt?
Like I do?
My face against the dirt
Do you see the moments shared?
Like I do
Perfectly unprepared
Try to see the things I see
And then tell me you don’t agree

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Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:31 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 5:18 am
I felt so much anger in this. Way to go. It's so much powerful if a poet release their emotion into their work...Good job!
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choirchic101 said...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 7:54 pm
this is good. i like the emotion in it. its so raw
*Blu*Eyed*Bi*:) said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 7:14 pm
i love it :)
and i do see the hurt thru my own eyes so i can imagine the hurt from yours
~purple_musician~ said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 4:45 pm
i know wat you mean, i dont think i could've said it in a better way :) keep writing and if u can check me out :)
lizzy96 replied...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 8:37 pm
i checked out your work and i liked i a lot. thanks for the comment!
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