I never thought

December 11, 2009
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I never thought it would hurt this bad, to let you go. I never thought hearing your voice would make my heart stop. I never thought being without you would make me feel so alone, without you im lost I never should have let you go. Never should we have ended the way we did. I cant help but smile when I see you, just so you dont know im really hurting inside, its all fake smiles, all fake laughs, because deep down inside, im alone and hurt!





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KatEbby said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 4:42 pm
I can feel your pain radiating through these words, but that is a good thing. The raw emotion is both powerfull and deeply touching. Your emotions shine through without the use of impractical overdramatics which is a lovely breath of fresh air. I think that this poem is very good, well done. :)
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:40 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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