Will you keep me?

December 5, 2009
By Poetic_Mind PLATINUM, West Monroe, New York
Poetic_Mind PLATINUM, West Monroe, New York
23 articles 12 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A woman's heart should be so lost in God, a man needs to seek him in order to find her."
"It is never the end, Just a chance for a new beginning."

Your eyes are such a lovely shade of beauty,
so deep, so rich,
so amazing, so extraordinary.

How can they hold me,
Keep me,
take me,
leacve me.

They hold me,
Like I wish you would,
They keep me,
like you could.

They take me,
to places I didnt know possible,
They leave me,
breathless gasping for more.

But you will not hear these words,
escape my lips,
because I cannot find them,
when your beautiful eyes,
land on mine.

The author's comments:
Everything I wish for but dont see happening.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jan. 9 2010 at 5:19 pm
haha, good job chica :)

on Jan. 4 2010 at 2:56 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

wow. u hav amazing talent. i luv this


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